In revising the Vignette, I noticed some basic errors I would intuitively make that made my writing not clear. One of the common mistakes I made was using relative words in describing the Qingdao town. For instance in saying Qingdao is old and new, and words like great do not give an exact and precise image of the city. After going through my writing, I also noticed I needed to add some more details in describing the great town, this information would make my writing more detailed and poetic, and this was intended to capture the interest of the reader. I also needed to get rid of information that did not add more positive value to the writing, for instance, the information pertaining the colonization of Qingdao; this would be replaced with more positive details of the town like the economic activities of the residents. Moving forward I would like to make more changes in my sentences structure, some of my sentences are extended in a manner that seems too much, I would like to change them to be more concise and clear.

In the style memo, the greatest challenge I faced was in imitating Steinbeck sentence structure, this was not an easy task since it required structuring the sentences to sound more poetic and appealing, and this required a lot of creativity. Structuring the opening sentence to be both symbolic and poetic was the most challenging part of the writing. I, however, gave it my back and eventually proudly managed to pull out an opening sentence similar to that of Steinbeck, My opening sentence mentions the location, name of the town and also incorporates some symbolic words making it more appealing. I intend to tap my feelings into my writing as well as allowing my work to be open to interpretationin order to help me in constructing better sentence structures in the future, whether poetic or not.

My writing has improved in a significant way; I am able to distill complex contemplations and thoughts into straightforward, clear language that can be rapidly and effectively comprehended by others. My vocabulary is stronger now and I’m able to use robust words in my writing unlike before. My passion for reading has also improved, and I credit much of my writing improvements to this. I have more attention to detail and can spot any grammatical error in writing, and this has enabled me to be able to capture all descriptive details in my writing.

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Werbach, K. D. (2016). The Song Remains the Same: What Cyberlaw Might Teach the Next Internet Economy. SSRN Electronic Journal. doi:10.2139/ssrn.2732269

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