Hello Cook, first of all, let me say that I am very impressed by the topic you choose to address. It is one topic that we can’t avoid discussing in society. You started your speech very well with a scenario of a sick person in a hospital who can’t do anything. However, you lacked the attention getter in your remarks. Attention getter helps to attract the attention of the viewers at the beginning of the speech. However, I expected that you would introduce yourself first and the topic that you are addressing the people.  Your introduction of what euthanasia is was good, and throughout the speech, you had facts to support your claims. Cook, I liked your slides. They are simple and easy to understand. However, you need to make the slides more visible for viewers to see.

The structure of the speech is well arranged to start with an introduction, body and lastly the conclusion.  I agree that you persuaded the viewer’s well to accept your stand on euthanasia in society. You achieved this as your paper seems well researched with excellent facts. I also did the same topic and just like you I had good facts, and I was able to convince my viewers that euthanasia is right in society.

However, I noticed that you did not maintain good eye contact with your viewers. This is very important. You also did not acknowledge the sources you used as required by the instructions. Viewers need to know that you used correct sources while preparing for the speech.  There was no gestures and body movement, and your eyes are positioned in one place.  It’s good for the viewers to see half of your body if not full. Good body gesture will enable you to switch well between speech and the slides.

To conclude, let me say that your speech was good as it was very persuasive. However, I believe that if you improve in on a few things, then you are ready to go. All the best.

 
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